Once there was an old man and a old women the old women made food for the old man but the old man didn't like the food. so the old women sow a witch the witch come down to her, the witch gave seed and said tree is hard to grow , but you are a good Gardiner so the old women went to plant it but the witch said feed it water it and weed it.
wen the old women said to the tree I feed you, I water you and weed you well blease give me some soup and the tree said pull my branch and the soup came down.
In writing I am leaning to add more detail to my stories to make then interesting
I need to improve on using more interesting words.
I feel proud because my stories are getting better.
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