Once there was an old man and a old women the old women made food for the old man but the old man didn't like the food. so the old women sow a witch the witch come down to her, the witch gave seed and said tree is hard to grow , but you are a good Gardiner so the old women went to plant it but the witch said feed it water it and weed it.
wen the old women said to the tree I feed you, I water you and weed you well blease give me some soup and the tree said pull my branch and the soup came down.
In writing I am leaning to add more detail to my stories to make then interesting
I need to improve on using more interesting words.
I feel proud because my stories are getting better.
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Monday, May 30, 2016
Thursday, May 19, 2016
Reflection for writing
In writing I am learning to add detail to my stories to make them interesting. I need to improve on using more interesting words. I feel proud because my stories are getting better.
Friday, May 13, 2016
Tuesday, May 10, 2016
Sloppy Tiger and the party
WALT make connections in the text.
Write 2 Sentences about something this story reminds you of.
1.when I went to a play thing I saw a sloppy grill she pop a balloon
2. When I was at school I was on the bench my friend owmost pushed me off
How did this story make you feel?
- It made me feel crazy because the tiger is crazy
Reflection: In reading I am learning to make connections. I am feeling because I read well. I need to improve on reading chapter books so I can get better at reading.
Friday, May 6, 2016
Explain Everything

WALT count down to solve subtraction problems. I found this easy because I have done work like this before.
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